Target audience feedback

Here our some of our results from survey monkey.com
1. What did you think of the video ?
i liked it :)
a very well put together amateur music video demonstrating a strong use of story telling backed up with well placed performance pieces.
main actor was fantastic. timings of the video all fit in very well with the music showing it has been edited together very well.
I like the story and the performance parts
2. Did you think the editing was fast and effective ? did you ever find yourself getting bored with the video?
yes. no.
I thought there were lots of editing to keep you interested :)
never get bored!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the video was well paced throughout
3. Did you understand the narrative of the video ? if so what was your impression of it ?
yes. that the guy was trying to get with the girl but kept failing but got her in the end.
the narrative was well put across allowing for character development
I thought the story worked really well with the song and genre of music
4. Did you think our video had a wide range of shot angles and effects ?
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
5. Do you think the video suits the genre of the band ?
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
6. Is there anything, if you were making the video , that you would do differently ?
maybe make some shots brighter? some were quite dark and hard to see.
more close ups of the gorgeous main actor
Maybe in the chorus have more effects?
7. Were the shot transitions/cuts in time with the music?
Mostly
Mostly
Yes
Yes
Yes
Mostly
Yes
8. House colors are colors that appear often to brand the band ? looking at the video what colors would you say were our house colors ?
red and blue
although not put across in the strongest manner through out i would be pushed towards choosing red.
red and blue?
Red, yellow and blue
9. Were there any shots/images that stood out from the video e.g : featured alot/were quite remarkable/repeated
clown and balloon
The shot which was slowed down when the music changed I thought worked really well

10. What did you enjoy/least enjoy about the video ?
enjoyed: cake throwing and heart drawn around couple least enjoyed: webcam bit as it was hard to see
The music to visuals and lyrics to visuals :)
i enjoyed seeing the clown dance :)
the opening shot was good
Here is a word cloud showing the paper feedback.