Ideas for shots

Some draft ideas of shots and order , basic idea of video and shots so far :
Shot 1 : Shot of guitar on first notes of intro with artist name and title
Shot 2: Shot of Drums as they come into the music
Shot 3: Shot of main guy's face changing reaction , cut to beats in music
Shot 4: Idea of point of view watching girl as she walks to location
Shot 5: His view of her and walk towards car- words 'something good can work' place behind
Shot 6: Shot of girls at meeting place
Shot 7 : Idea of 2 guys driving in in cars of different expense
Shot 8: Her view of the guy
Shot 9: He thinks she's looking at him - reaction shot
Shot 10: She gets in car with another guy, fitting to lyrics 'gotta little competition now'
Shot 11: Sad reaction of guy as he sees girl not going with him
Shot 12: His car reversing shown out of the back of the girl and other guys car.
this is roughly up to 40 secs of the intro as it goes into the verse
Shot 13:Shot of girl talking to guy from back of their car.
Shot 14 : Shot of guy talking in mirror,checking armpits
cuts between and maybe split screen of these shots as fits with lyrics 'you're going to find it hard to cope on your own now'
Shot 15:Shot of flowers zooms out to see guy holding them
Shot 16: Girl comes up and receives flowers and walks away with smile
Shot 17: Guy looks happy walking then sees flowers in bin round corner of his path
Shot 18: looks sad, panning shot to left to show clown with the same reaction, followed by a baloon motif of the band going into the sky.
Shot 19 :Shot of screen with guy on webcam saying lyrics
Shot 20: Split screen of her rejecting him on computer and his reaction
ideas of more shots of performance here but need to develop
Shot 21: Stop motion of him in four different shots with different outfits , then fast cut montage of all four
Shot 22: She sees him in outfit and likes
Shot 23:He has a cake in his hands,follow cake to see bottom of other person, the girls, with lyrics on cake.
Shot 24 :Shot of her accepting and throwing in his face edit of throw being cut up in stop motion, and his reaction changing as he gets more cake in his face.
Shot 25:Him sad and clown again
ideas of more performance shots and cut shots between the girl and guy here but no definite ideas yet
Shot 26: he sees space hopper sign
Shot 27: He brings space hopper and she's happy from this
Shot 28:He winks
Shot 29: Girl being spun on trolley, camera placed on it while moving.
General sense of movie happiness here- using intertextuality and editing in black and white shots
Shot 30: tree with pretty props dangling
more general shots of girl and guy being happy together
Shot 31: Overhead high angle shot of girl and guy hugging, a heart gets drawn around them.
Shot 32:They look at each other and zoom out to see guys on space hoppers.
Shot 33: Shot from back of the couple as they bounce off into the sunset as it fades into black and white.